I think
that John’s method is the best, because he dedicates his life to help other
people who needs it. He puts others life over his own, and that is admirable.
Not everyone would do that. He is actually fighting the disability itself. What
I mean about that is that when he help people, he helps the community and give
people a chance to have a life. Though Jenny’s method is a good one, it is
important to stand up to the things we believe in. Maybe someday they will
listen to her protest. Personally, I would have done the same as John, we cannot
rely on that the government will listen to us, so we have to take the matter in
our own hands and help each other the best we can.
Sources:
Page 159, Access (14.01.15)
The content is fine, but look into these grammar/vocab issues:
SvarSlettother people who need
others' lives
What I mean = My opinion about that is...
he helps and gives